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At The End of the Rainbow

At the end of the rainbow
there's no pot of gold,
Just a friendly hippopotamus.

His name is Hank
and his brother is Frank
and they live together
at the end of each rainbow

They don't know how to talk
so they just walk
forever and ever and ever.

You see,
there is no end of the rainbow!
A rainbow is but a mere circle
of tiny dew drops
forming a beautiful shape that appears as an arch.
However, (brace yourselves for some knowledge)

A rainbow is a circle
and everyone who sees it
only sees half of it.

This is because god has to share
all his wondrous creation with the world.
He can't just give us a whole rainbow
Get Real.

So i'll wrap this poem up
if you ever see
a weird shadow at night
or after a storm you hear noises,
don't be afraid
because its just
Hank and Frank
searching for the end of the rainbow!

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  • nathan8
    April 22, 2008

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    this is a cute take on the promt, and i like how you have filled it with some knowlage too, its a great flow of the rhymes and the it is cool, good luck in the contest, keep writing, -Amy and nathan8


  • Yahiko
    April 17, 2008
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    this is cute I love it!


  • CowboyFan1
    April 17, 2008

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    I WOULD LIKE TO MEET hANK AND fRANK. wHEN YOUR POEM SAID "after a storm you hear noises,
    don't be afraid
    because its just
    Hank and Frank" - iT IS REALLY MY LITTLE BROTHER TALKING.

    iT WAS FUNNY AND CREATIVE. GOOD JOB.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    terrific

    Excellent imagination! Funny and touching at the same time. You certainly know how to combine both together. Thanks for entering. Good luck.
    Brian


  • Foofy
    April 17, 2008
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    NICE!

    I like it!


  • paperbackwriter
    April 17, 2008
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    good imagination

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