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nothingness

So here I lay
at a loss for words
staring at the empty walls of my bedroom
and although the sun still shines
brightly outside my windows
Darkness floods my vision
Insane thoughts cloud my mind
that resemble only that of a dream
waiting to be released when I finally rest my head
Impossibilities lie ahead,
things I could never acheive
The blank picture frame on my dresser seems to fill
With the faces of regret,
of which there are so many.
I close my eyes forcefully,
hoping it'll all fade away with the night
I await the last moments of conciousness to end
as i drift..............

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    A lot of thoughts behind this poem, builds a story in the readers mind.
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes to you
    Julie