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At the end of my rainbow

Is a big black pot
and in this pot
is a bunch of gold
and with this gold
I will buy books
because I think
reading is important
and a gift for everyone
so I would use my gold
for books that everyone could enjoy
and if there is any left
I would buy a pack of gum
Thank you

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  • Slick99
    August 9, 2008
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    hahahaha... i might would buy chocolate instead of gum...lol...


  • nathan8
    April 22, 2008
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    this poem is cute, i like how you say that you know that reading is important, and that you would buy books for everyone to read and enjoy, then i like how at the end if you had any money left you would buy a pack of gum, thats so random, you are a great writer, keep it up and good luck in the contest, -Amy and nathan8


  • Kristin Melissa
    April 21, 2008

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    Awww... this is so sweet... most little girls would want to buy toys and such, but instead you choose books. That would be my choice as well since books can take you to so many wonderful places.
    Koodles
    Blessed be
    Mystic


  • Hope Angel silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    I like this and your choices. I love you and good luck


  • Arizona Sunset
    April 17, 2008

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    smart choices excellent poem best to you in the contest love ya ~Auntie Trisha~

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    A wise thing to use a pot of gold for, Genna.
    I'm proud of you; thanks for entering my contest.
    Good luck.

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