The plan had been prepared oh so carefully
That retarted TOM said, I've done this stunt before,
I'll be at the top on the ceiling fan
Then I'll slowly drop you down to the floor
Katie, had always thought that Tom was nuts
Especially when he wanted me to turn to Scientology,
But, she was older now, and wiser too
Neither one of them could even pass Biology
So, here Katie was a dangling from a ceiling fan,
When Tom, kept jumping from ceiling fan to couch,
She was hungry, and could only think of that cheese
Quickly turning into one female mouse grouch
So finally, she was low enough to grab the cheese prize
She perfectly got the cheese without a giant snap,
She yelled at Tom, to bring her back up to the top
And like a man, he had jumped on the counter, to take a big mouse crap!
Author notes
WRITTEN 4/17/2008
POETDONTKNOWIT
A contest entry
- Funny poems please by queen.
300 points, ended April 17, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Humor Me/pre-writes allowed by piccola.
600 points, ended August 21, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice surprise ending. I was thinking it might be a mouse but wasn't teally sure until the end. Thank you for brightening my day with an entry.
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funny
a cute funny write for the prompt . . good use of rhyme . . liked "The plan had been prepared oh so carefully" and "Quickly turning into one female mouse grouch" . . well done
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This Is Funny Alright
What an imagination on this one. You crack me up and I really needed a laugh about now. I'm still laughing for this is a different poem that is for sure. You did an excellent job in writing a funny poem alright. Thank you for sharing with me.
Many Blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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they are mouses right? if so thats cliver, you left it right till the end to tell the reader, this was funny, im laughing away here lol
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Very cute poem,
Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
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