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Close Call

Duh-dut, duh-dut
The theme song plays in my head
one false move and
I'm as good as dead

Duh-dut, duh-dut
More Maxwell Smart than Ethan Hunt
Hanging on by a wing and a prayer
I wish I hadn't accepted this dare

Duh-dut, duh-dut
Make it stop!
Here I go,
going for the drop

Duh-dut, duh-dut
Look, quickly
do you see?
I like cheddar, not swiss cheese!

Duh-dut, duh-dut
Get me out of here now!
I'm not risking my life
for a piece of that cow.

Duh-dut, duh-dut
Whew! Wow!
That sure was a close one
Wait, what was that?

MEOWWWWWW!

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  • peridotPixi
    April 17, 2008
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    this is a great take on the picture and this poem is really cute, keep writing, -Amy

  • queen Moderators member
    April 17, 2008

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    he misses the trap and gets ate by the cat poor little mouse Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest