He never let me have my say
but I get these last words anyway.
Author notes
Picture credit: Tombstone Generator (http://www.jjchandler.com/tombstone/download.php)
A contest entry
- Epitaph Pay It Forward by RedwingSpirit.
675 points, ended April 19, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
Comments
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there is something to be said about having the last word you know.. and this one defiantly captures that.. what a thought to be left with huh?? lol
Congratulations on the HM

kat

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LOL, now this one did make me laugh


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HEHE very well done Like this Thanks for entering good luck
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LOL... classic!!
You can write about anything can't you?


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Revenge is sweet and, in this case, eternal.
You hope.
jjj
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I obviously didn't write this from my own perspective - one would hope
so the best I can do is try to see it through someone elses eyes... I'm sure there are many women out there who could identify with the intent - if not the specific words... and get a laugh along the way!
Thanks for your comments!
Ken
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HAHha lol grat! LMao


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Glad it gave you a smile... Thanks for the read.
Ken
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lol...what can I say....all the best!


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Glad you got a chuckle out of it... We need those every day
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