Moonlight {Rictameter}

Softly
The moonlight drifts
From the star studded sky
Down to the darkened plains of Earth
Where many sleep peacfully on the ground
Resting, not a care in the world,
Beneath midnight skies where
Stars are dancing
Softly.

A contest entry

Rictameter anyone? by Nicotine Eyes. 300 points, ended April 24, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Anything you want by MrCrepsley. 600 points, ended September 10, 2008, 195 entries
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baghdaelf
May 29, 2008

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WOW!
I really enjoyed this. Are you sure you are only 12? Seriously, I work with kids and even some of my older teens would have trouble coming close to this.
myorama
May 29, 2008
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Ohhh I really loved this piece it gave me such a wonderful sense of piece.
PerfectImperfection
May 28, 2008

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A lovely rictameter piece you have penned here. These are quite fun to write, and just happen to be my favorite form. Very well penned! Congrats on your shiny!
MrCrepsley
May 21, 2008
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COOLLLLL!!!!! Talk To me about this!!!!! Good Luck
MrCrepsley
April 28, 2008
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Wow
I love how your personifying the Midnight.
Try spelling peacfully like this: peacefully.
MrCrepsley
April 28, 2008
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Cool
Nicotine Eyes
April 17, 2008
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Beautiful Thanks!