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The sun there was always warm
(Thats how I remember it)
The smell of fish mingled with salt
made the air slightly damp,

but I was content -
which is better than happy

The sun glistened, sparkling on the water
And sunday mornings meant strolling
down the boardwalk with my thoughts.
Content

The memory is a good one but melancholy
Because it truly felt like home...

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Wexford, and goodtide harbour - and my little apartment that looked out over the bay - I will always miss that place!

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  • passim silver member
    April 20, 2008

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    Wexford sounds lovely. I enjoyed your poem, congratulations on your HM


  • Errant Panther
    April 17, 2008

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    I could almost smell the salt spray as it drifts by the apartment window you speak of. Best wishes to you and thanks for sharing.