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Candy

Chewy yummy sweet delight that will keep me up all night.
All I want is that yummy goody that is chewy.
Nutty crunchy caramel taste only problem is it sticks to your gums like paste.
Delightful taste that makes me hyper and quick as a viper.
Yummy goodness as i eat that special candy, its oh so dandy.

its no good but im having writers block

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  • Decorus Somnium
    April 25, 2008

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    Ahh...you made me hungry for sweets! And I can't do that today because I'm fasting! God I can't help it
    Such a cute poem!


  • Ace13
    April 18, 2008

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    I love your randomness! I like the flow of the poem and i really like the unique rhyme scheme. and in case you didn't know I love originality and you have it