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Her Stroll

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French lace parasol as delicate as her failing heart

used like a shield by fragile fingers to buffet wind and sun,

while she rests between breaths to stroll the shore with her young son

and the waves sing a song that remind of her husband lost at sea.

 

The tide crests in its magical salty perfume

she tries to inhale and let it intoxicate

with all the passion that it did for her love

unable to stop thinking with pain over the dreaded storm

that swallowed his ship and all its lives.

 

Hoping the child will find his own dreams when she is gone

wishing her soul could become a mermaid to join her mate in murky deep.

Author notes

Image credit (if used): Frederick McCubbin "Moyes Bay, Beaumaris"

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  • passim silver member
    April 20, 2008

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    Lovely poem, sad but with a fond passion. Congratulations on your Bronze trophy


  • Sandygram
    April 20, 2008

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    Congratulations on winning the Brinze. This was a lovely poem and much desering of a trophy. A pleasure to read this morning. You have a wonderful day.

    Take Care,
    Sandy


  • thepoetssoul
    April 17, 2008

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    Now this is a stunning poem you have penned.The imagery and rhythm is outstandingYou weaved such sadness within your words.BRAVO!!!Splendidly done indeedBest of wishes to you

    Tony


  • Errant Panther gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    Lovely, if somewhat tragic take on the prompt, nice to see your pen can still weave magic on the page. Thanks for entering and best wishes.