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Trap

I lost my mom this way,
I lost my brother yesterday.
I now understand
What happens in mouse land.
I want to get that cheese
without setting off that trap.
I really don’t want to wake the cat.
My sister is helping me out today,
She tied up the strings.
She lowers me down,
I guess should probably share.
I don’t know, she might not care.
As long as I don’t get caught,
I would rather not.
But getting that cheese is worth it to me,
So I can share with the rest of my family. 

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  • queen Moderators member
    April 17, 2008

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    The things we will risk for our families very cute poem thank you for entering and good luck in the contest


  • daviscth silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    LOl. I enjoyed your take on this cute picture.