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restless


restless
the berries
  long to ripen
  yearning
      that cherry red
    complexion
  of a lover's
                  lips

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    Deeply creative and engaging... x


  • Dreamana
    April 17, 2008

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    So few words, but so beautiful. Before now I had never imagined berries yearning. Nice
    If u get a mo, please review one of mine. TY