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Love

Love is uncontrollable,

unpredictable,

undefinable,

and the best damn thing a person can find!!

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  • newnoakua
    August 10, 2008
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    Awesome! Short and to the point, but still truethful (sp) and really goood. Great job!


  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    June 25, 2008
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    true, but it doesn't really sound like a poem. it sounds like a quote.
    -kassie


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 6, 2008

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    AMEN! lol
    this wasn't a novel or prose, which both are tend to be lengthy (at least not this short). what you did, in this short length, was capture the essence of love. well penned!


  • GoodKnightPoet
    May 6, 2008
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    Short, sweet and to the point. I like it.


  • Blooming Poet
    April 17, 2008

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    So true. I am in love and I am so glad i am, so the last statement is really true to me. The first two words really suum up love well. best of luck to you.


  • bananasfoster42
    April 17, 2008
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    AMEN TO THAT!

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