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Forgotten

Forgotten

Nearly seventeen,
let the ivory porcelain keys become me.

Forgotten

Cracked and shattered,
I am Mozart.

Forgotten




A contest entry

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  • Tattboyspet
    April 21, 2008

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    seems you have taken on the picture very well, but there was a prompt to go with that picture which isn't as evident as the pic itself sorry!
    This is, however, a really enjoyable and unique take on the pic so thank you


  • Pink Absinthe
    April 17, 2008

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    What an oddly articulated poem but I love it nonetheless; amzingly sweet in such a short frame;
    well done!


  • Requiem-For-The-Past
    April 17, 2008
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    ooooo

    This is a good piece.. i really liked it ^.^

    Good luck in the contest babe!