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The Ogre And The Bumblebee

Ogreish

     pastel blooms,
promenade,

     stealing room,

entombed

     scents blitz,
bumblebee

     that sits,
on pollen pits.







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Prompt: Picture Prompt (15 words)

Painted by Nel Whatmore

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    April 22, 2008

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    This is Great!

    Dunno how I got here but I'm glad I did. This is a wonderful write for the pix prompt! I was so surprised to see this. I'm daft that U only got HM. I'll have to see the other poems. Who'd ever expect 2 C flowers be demons of doom! Very funny!


  • Whenitefallz
    April 18, 2008

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    Ahah, fantastic! Whom do blooms think they are? Damned beauty bullies! This grinning stuff feels fabulous ~
    Merci Beaucoup..


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    Truly creative and attention grabbing... x


  • tara wilson gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    this is very pretty imagery..I love gerbera daisies.





  • Unsigned gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    stunning...so much imagary in so few words...

    Simon


  • Arizona Sunset
    April 17, 2008

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    creative, and I loved the photo you used thank you for sharing ~blessings always~ Trisha

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