If I had unlimited wealth
Controlled by nothing and no one but me
I would give to the poor
I would donate to charities
I would pay back all my debts
Money would go to research for diseases
And to those across seas
Who cannot afford a bowl of rice
I would give freely to my friends when they needed it
I would give it away to find a way to stop global warming
Pet shelters will never be overlooked
Nothing fancy for me, just an ordinary life
I just want to help others, help save the world
And be what everyone looks for. . .I will be a hero.
A contest entry
- What would you do... by Spring Blossoms.
600 points, ended April 28, 2008, 6 entries
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Firstly thankyou for you rate and review, secondly, wow how beautiful is this, its very much how i would like to do things, its beatifully written and you can tell its very honest. Good luck xx
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wow.
I loved this poem because it shows how much you want to save the world. Thanks. Thanks for entering the competition. Good luck
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Thank you for your entry
This is a very good way of showing what you would do to help people in need. Its good want to be a hero and keep nothing for yourself but an ordinary life. Its a good poem and I like that it was short.
God Bless
Ashley -
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This was a very optimistic/positive poem.. It's good to hear someone say this type of thing opposed to the usual "GET CRUNK AND GET BITCHES!"
Hah, nice write.
*Applauds*
--Elliana
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Aww this is a nice poem and I can so relate to this since I want to do the samething. I really had that saying money brings happiness, but when you think about the world we live in that's the only happiness we want. Without money our lives would be hell and just miserable but that's why we all look up to those who donate. Really it's a touching poem, has a message that most people can relate too and want to do. Good luck in the contest my friend! Good Write
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