hidden desire cannot speak the
words your eyes reveal with the
artistry of an invisible brush
and confetti jewels that sparkle
with the depth of passion only
your heart feels
Author notes
prompt: picture by Vampirella87
30 words
A contest entry
- PIF Prompt Contest 10 entries 30 words more or less by mysticstorm.
525 points, ended April 17, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PIF see this picture by trekkergirl.
400 points, ended September 6, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very nice... well deserving of the silver... I'm not sure I get the connection with the current prompt but that doesn't decrease my enjoyment. Thank you for sharing this...
Ken
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thanks
the young woman is holding her hands over her heart and hiding one hand so I think it fits . . hope so anyway !!
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Nicely done...reads really well and is a lovely take on the prompt...nice work...
thsnk you for entering! -
Excellent
Excellent take on this prompt. your words flow beautifully. good luck in the contest
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