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Out of the light and into the darkness
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Author notes
The form I have used here is called a reversed Etheree. An Etheree has 1 syllable in the first line, graduating down to 10 in the last line. Rules on the form can be found here: http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.html
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by sweetgirlwa.
925 points, ended April 22, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
my first attempt at this form - let me know if there's a mistake
Comments
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yah i like it and the form it realy is a good poem i can never make a poem that is good and is in a form so i aplad you for being able to do that you have a gift and your lucky use it well
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form poetry is hard to be creative with usually, as you are stuck to the rules that bind the form, but you have seemed to find not only the form, but also the voice to say what you wanted....nice job
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Thanks for reading and for the lovely comment
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You are amazing at writing like this
Such control yet such a statement proven in this poem
I really like it and would encourage you to enter my contest
Keep writing! and comment me
Thanks!!
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Wow... I love this form and your poem is stunning!
Go you!!
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Very nicely done. I had not heard of this form, but I admittedly am not familiar with form poetry much. Great work and Good Luck
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Excellent job!!!! Love the form and your flow was spot on!!! The word choice here was flawless and conveyed the emotions wonderfully!! Well done and best of luck..
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I've never heard of the form Etheree, but I'm excited to try it out :-) I really enjoyed this piece, and I can really relate to it. Great write!
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Wow, outstanding job on the Etheree with such a powerful message. I like this kind of poetry and of course I like the presentation of it
Very well done
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