listen here and listen well
i love her too much to tell
always and forever
and ill never leave
so you'll never grieve
for now we are apart
but you have my entire heart
to be with you i'm so lucky
even though i'm in Kentucky
i don't want to make you sad
or make you feel bad
i haven't been this open
i have this explicit feeling
uncapable of dealing
of losing you
yes baby i love you too
and to me you are perfect
in this way you affect
every part of me
which you can see
we were meant to be
you give me butterflies
thats very rare
and thats more than care
we are a pair
and i hope your my last
A contest entry
- Saying "I Love You" for the first time... by SchizoChic.
450 points, ended April 21, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love's Many Faces by Silly Rabbit..
600 points, ended May 22, 2008, 56 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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aww daddy thats so cute. i love how u expressed ur feelings. good job. i love it.
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Its so sweet
I'm so happy for the two of you. :]
This is amazing you two are so happy together
I wish you both the best :]
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your a girl jk but really i went to sleep and slept too long
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Aww. Hunny... you did make me cry. God I love you too. I can't say anything else... I'm speechless. Don't worry, I plan on being your last, as long as I can help it.
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I LOVED IT
She will love it too great job at expressing you feelings it is good when the ones we love express how they feel about us for we can never read their minds.
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