You gave me love and pretty blue roses.
(Not quite Lucy-blue but I know you tried)
But for some reason I push you away.
So please don't let me run, don't let me hide.
I'm trying to stop, but it feels so hard.
I'm just not used to this feeling, this love.
It's not even like my heart is so scarred.
But don't let me push and don't let me shove.
I need you to hold me, hold me real tight.
Because otherwise I know I will run.
It's my fault, and what I'm doing's not right.
It's wrong (so wrong) and I know it's not fun.
It's not you, it's me (I know it's cliche)
I'll stay if you don't let me run away.
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sonnet. bleh.
Please tell me what you think
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Did I let you run away or did we fall apart?
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I think maybe both.
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i find that life is very cliche.
i liked the last line, only because its true in about every way i can think of.
nice write.
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I Am Feeling This. You Are An Amazing Poet. You Should Be Published.
You got a unique talent that needs to come to full bloom. You are natural with your words and the style that you use when writing. I really like this poem and I would recommend anyone to read this poem. I is very deep and from the heart. I can tell who writes poetry from the heart and who writes just because they know how to make words rhyme. Clearly you are a poet that writes from the heart and I think that is wonderful. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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Aww sweetie, your not pushing me away. Well, I dont feel that way. If anything I'm pushing you away, by not telling you everything . . . I'll explain when we see each other . . . in person (lol)
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hmmmm...nice. sonnets are usually boring or stupid. this one was actully really cool. awesome.
i love this, and i love you.
<3julia
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This is like what we were talking about when you drove me home.
Sonya, I love it.
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Aw Sonya. This was amazing. The last two lines especially spoke to me. Really amazing job, I loved every line.
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