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Spring

Brilliant array of Purple, Red and Green,
Brightly lit from the yellow sun.
Natures spring beauty.

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    Just lovely... x


  • Unsigned gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    Lovely


    great write poet

    Simon

  • carole21
    April 17, 2008

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    nice

    nice short write to paint a pretty picture . . liked "Brilliant array" and "natures spring beauty" . . good luck in the contest . .


    • buffsab99
      April 17, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for your wonderful comment. I appreciate it very much


  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    Beautiful and so true...Spring brings so much beauty with it as everything starts to waken and renew...well written in brevity and flow...
    Best!


    • buffsab99
      April 17, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you so much for that wonderful comment.

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