Rolling Thunder
Crashing Waves
Sand underneath my feet
Barefoot I walk
With you by my side
Guiding me
Holding me
Ever so tight
Calming my fears
Wiping away my tears
Your hands are strong
Your shoulders are wide
My love with you
I feel safe
With you I have
Found my resting place
Walk beside me
All the days of our lives
Let's start new
As husband and wife
Author notes
Just something new I write...
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Lovely !
Your words from your precious soul are cherished!
Thanks for sharing here my wonderful niece!
Love ya, Uncle Tim 
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bravo
Ah, so lovely and sooo rooomantic, finely done with some wonderful poetical images here... bravo... brvo... bravo..
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Baie Mooi
A very nice poem !!! Well Done
Jackie
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so sweet to hear it from someone you want to spend the rest of your life with..
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The title suggested something new ...
and yes: for this website this IS something new: to be save, content, and strong in the embrace of true and divine Love ...
It is possible, you know. And your poem said it well.
Love
Myra
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This is quite beautiful, sweetie
Wonderful to see a new write from you!
Much love to you, my friend; good to see you here...have missed you so much! -
Just beautiful ... how lovely is this on the heart to read
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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WOW!!!!! That's beautiful....really really passionate, very emotional....just loved it....sensous....just wanted i needed to read right at this moment....thank you !!!!!!
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extremely sensational
This is filled with a lot of emotion. The sensous vivid picture come into the dream of one who reads this writing. With some soft music added to this writing, who knows what the mind might do. Great job, Rick
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Envious
I knew your pen would roll again. This is the catch to some romance novel. You know what I mean, the hook to cause people to say, "I want to read this book. I have to buy it". You know, it has the beautiful Tessa drawn on the paperback cover with the broad shouldered Adonis cradling her in his arms as the waves are crashing against their bodies on the shorelne. She is dressed provacatively and his bare chest could carry the storms of life easily. Ok, maybe I went a little too far, but that is what it makes me think of. RC
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Wow!1
Oh My Word so Happy to see You back Beautiful!!
Your quill got to dancing adn spilled this Beauty out
Lovely and wish You much Happiness!!
LOved this!!
Welcome Back!!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Hi Tessa,
Is there a story behind this? LOL, this is wonderful. What a great read! I know those feelings quite well. You did a wonderful job on this one my friend!!
Ek is lief vir jou altyd
Nyetta
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The piece is very heartfelt, personal and it has a very nice beat to it
Good write.
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Very Musical
Really a joy to read.
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Lovely
I think you have done a beautiful job in writing this piece. It flows real smooth and is filled with emotions. Words that are indeed spoken from the heart.
Much love,
Many blessings
David
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