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Baby


                ripen fruit
                  seeds planted
                Love produced
                  swollen belly
                beautiful appearence
                  Endearing promise
                perfectly formed...
                                      Baby

Author notes

Picture Prompt: Painting by Susan Kraut

A contest entry

How does this make you feel and can you relate to this

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Comments


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    April 18, 2008

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    This is a nice, sparsely worded pome that shows exactly how you feel about the subject.

    Nice job.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    So sweet and sincerely creative... x


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    Wow--A lot said in a few words---Beautifully Versed!
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the Contest!