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A taste so sweet

Choking on my every word
Stumbling over every thought
Grasping for something that's not there
Wishing, dreaming it was real
Just wanting to feel
Can't explain what has came over me
A smile
A laugh
Something that may never be?
So far apart
Yet you seem so close
Hard to understand
How someone I might never see
could make me so fucking happy
Just when darkness was setting in
A light so bright
A feeling so right
A reason not to give up the fight
Not sure how or what to do
But I think I'm falling for you
Something I have never felt
Hard to explain what I need to say
But your always making my day
And suddenly the sky is not so gray
Just when I was headed in the wrong direction
You came along
With your beauty and perfection
And it has been quite awhile
But I'm lost for words
And all I can do is smile
=)

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  • eviscerated
    December 6, 2008

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    Aww, that's really cute.
    I think you sort of lost it a bit in the middle, but your ending saved it. Nicely done.

  • Angel Eyed Baby
    May 7, 2008
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    Hmm.. already commented on it but doing it again!!!
    You know.. this poem is printed, in a frame and on my wall....
    I read this everyday!
    You know... never met someone as great as you...
    I love you....


  • Shaylee
    April 21, 2008

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    awwww

    i really love this one.. and the ending.. wow.... "you came along with your beauter and perfection and it has been quite awhile but i'm lost for words and all i can do is smile.." this line makes me smile.. love it really and truly..


  • SUNSHiiNEx
    April 19, 2008
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    this is wayy different than what you usually write.
    it's very nice :]

  • Angel Eyed Baby
    April 17, 2008

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    Love It!!

    hmm, you scaring me away seems almost impossible. don't think you can do that.
    all you can do is make me smile
    make my day bright.
    I don't know what to say.
    you're amazing!

    XO- autumn!!~

    =)

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