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What Say

What say we travel light around the moon,
taking nothing, save ourselves, by night's illum

What say we travel cheap, by foot or steed,
Bed roll, a haversack is all we'll need.

What say we wonder hither, back, and yon,
Side by side or I will follow, you lead on.

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  • humblpye gold member
    September 2, 2008
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    Story of my life...

    "Just Say"...the word, I,m ready when you are...


  • old dog
    April 19, 2008
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    What say we never stop,
    just keep going 'til we drop.

  • Just4u
    April 17, 2008
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    There is much that can be dropped
    leaving only that which is "really" important.
    Our most memorable times are not in the chaos of days
    but in the quiet moments of intimate sharing...

    Have a lovely peaceful weekend my friend.

    seas surge, crowds scream
    and yet there is peace here
    in you

    Hugs...Eddy


  • quietly burning
    April 17, 2008
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    sweet and tight little piece
    that's "what" I "say"