along with him,
self destruction was
shown the door
tenacity prevails,
held together with
viscosity
Author notes
Prompt ~ persistent
15 words
In a list
A contest entry
- single word prompt by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 17, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You go girl!
Love the sharp emotion and quickness of pace. Wonderfully done.
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one door closes (or you force it to close) another one opens. It is a shame that sometimes, the person you leave behind just cant get their head around it all.
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powerful and deeply profound... x
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So, another chapter closed eh? Great write dear!
Love and peace always,
mj.
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aww wow
strong words
good luck and take care
stephanie -
A strong and powerful piece, superbly penned. All the best in the contest
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Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read my piece. Juls
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I have eyedrops for that
Love, C
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