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Shut the door

 

 

along with him,

self destruction was

shown the door

 

tenacity prevails,

held together with

viscosity

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 




 

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  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    April 19, 2008

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    You go girl!

    Love the sharp emotion and quickness of pace. Wonderfully done.


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    April 18, 2008
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    one door closes (or you force it to close) another one opens. It is a shame that sometimes, the person you leave behind just cant get their head around it all.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    powerful and deeply profound... x


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    So, another chapter closed eh? Great write dear!


    Love and peace always,
    mj.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    aww wow
    strong words
    good luck and take care
    stephanie


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    A strong and powerful piece, superbly penned. All the best in the contest


  • Cannonsfire
    April 17, 2008
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    I have eyedrops for that Love, C

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