between
lust and love
she plays a game
of tic-tac-toe
my bed-
with her friend
Author notes
prompt; Adutery
image inspiration;
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2400/869.jpg?1208431534
A contest entry
- Adultery by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 17, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congratulations on your H.M.
this was fantastic with creativity love the tic- tac -toe part of this for truly it is a deadly game.
Well done Mally warm thoughts.
Frozentearz
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Classic~ immensely creative and incredibly profound... x
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Oh this is deadly - loved the way you spaced out the lines and the between the line scenes that you imagine. Much said in these few words.
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Love the metaphor. Your words sing beautifully even in a painful and sad situation. An excellent write.
Kelli
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well this is adultery, thats for sure, you hit it well...good luck in her contest...Lin
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