lined sidewalk,
mischievous little feet,
poking noses,
nasty smell to remember
till adulthood.
Author notes
We had everlasting flowers that look like the ones in the painting.they were so colourful, but never smelled good.Thanks for the trip to childhood.
Picture is your prompt
Painted by Nel Whatmore
the picture I put up is my own, to show the similarity of flowers found on yahoo search..hope that is not against the contest rules...Wanted my everlasting flower to stand by the Gerberas.
In a list
A contest entry
- Gerberas by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 17, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very cute a walk back in your childhood.


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Sure was fun going back...
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Such a profound and meaningful write.... x
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well written
childhood memories are oh so special
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They sure are....thanks for stopping by.
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lol stinky flowers! ewww
lol love this one sissy
best to you in the contest
blessings always~ Trisha


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Thanks a lot dear sis...
for wonderful smell...
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Excellent take and a heartfelt, in-depth attempt on the promt...
Wish you all the best in the contest...
Love
-kiddy

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Thank you so much at your kind words...Have a nice day!
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