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Holding Still

Frozen in quiescent still,
life's waxed objects
bustling motions,...

stopped,
~
 in their
inanimate disguise,
 
~

breathing.  
 
 

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15 words



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  • stavykm gold member
    April 22, 2008

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    WOW

    This one is different. I LOVED IT, you should have gotten a much hight trophy than that!! Beautifully written in describing a Still Life. Just a brillian mind that you have. I love the vocabulary as well as the way you designed the format of this poem. Wonderful darling..
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie


  • dustookie2
    April 18, 2008

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    Breathing is what it is all about life is a whispered breath soft and still but what happens when the last leaf falls........Brilliant take on the prompt Congratulations on the bling.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    Immensely creative and captivating... x


  • inspired-8 gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    Beautiful!

    Much said in few words nice write.