With continual commitment
to take off lives,
proud looking is
mighty menace -
the determined Death!
Author notes
Prompt : Persistent
A contest entry
- single word prompt by Gypsy-Princess.
420 points, ended April 17, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Wanna know what you think
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Came here to return the favor
I read this poem twice - don't know what to say - the last line speaks of death which is the beginning of life - we are spirit beings dressed in an earth suit of flesh and blood - then one day we will shed our earth suit and our spirit will keep on trucking - nice write - Bless God - Joe - (Dobar Dan) ------------------------------ hagd
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So deeply profound... x
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This piece here was very very deep...short but it really does sting. I like the title that you picked for this piece. That's very unique and matches the lines well. Nice job 
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A unique take on the prompt. Smoothly done, good luck
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