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Unclear



faith too strong
flesh tempting indulgence
mind oscillates
clear borders hazy
between morality and immoral

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    Truly creative and immensely profound... x


  • scentedrose
    April 17, 2008

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    Ah
    you're a bad boy!
    What have you been up to Venugopal?
    And what is pushpa going to think about that?


    • scentedrose
      April 18, 2008
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      Oh no...
      I am sorry for my inappropriate photo above my display name.
      I hadn't considered that you would see it.
      Will you forgive me?


  • crimsondew
    April 17, 2008
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    Excellent take..All the best!


  • inspired-8 gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    Brilliant!

    Strong write can feel the struggle.

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