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Still life


wind not making waves
ocean still and silent
bottom reflected on surface
lost in turbulance

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    This is so unique and such a different take on the picture prompt... x


  • Kiddy
    April 17, 2008

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    One more good write from your light pen, dad....
    But sometimes the images are left without connection, and they really work for me with your poems....
    'Lost in turbulance' is nice choice of words
    Good luck
    Love
    -Kiddy