Endanger
those I love,
those I love,
you will find my
determination undaunted,
pursuit assiduously relentless
retribution absolute.
you will find my
determination undaunted,
pursuit assiduously relentless
Author notes
15 words
Prompt: persistent
In a list
A contest entry
- single word prompt by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 17, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent
The love of your family and friends is so beautiful and protective. What a beautiful poem. Amazing just 15 words is something.
Love ya
your lil sis
penelope
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Truly creative and deep in meaning... x
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Wow, gorgeous piece, powerfully penned. All the best in the contest with it
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awww wow! wonderful write and good luck
i really love your wrd choice ^_^
take care
stephanie
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This is a stunning piece. I can see that you are courageous enough to protect those you love.
xx
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