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Friends and Family

Endanger
those I love,

you will find my
determination undaunted,

pursuit assiduously relentless
 
retribution absolute.
 
 
 

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15 words
Prompt: persistent

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  • stavykm gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    Excellent

    The love of your family and friends is so beautiful and protective. What a beautiful poem. Amazing just 15 words is something.
    Love ya
    your lil sis
    penelope


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    Truly creative and deep in meaning... x


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    Wow, gorgeous piece, powerfully penned. All the best in the contest with it


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    awww wow! wonderful write and good luck
    i really love your wrd choice ^_^
    take care
    stephanie


  • lostangel07
    April 17, 2008

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    This is a stunning piece. I can see that you are courageous enough to protect those you love.
    xx

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