Time swallowed concepts
leaving Persuasion's door,
open.
As words rolled
from tongues;
invading
fragile minds.
Author notes
15 words
Prompt ~ persistent
A contest entry
- single word prompt by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 17, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congrats on the gold
well deserved!!!
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thanks
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Deeply creative and attention grabbing... x
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Ooh, this is a wonderful take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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it's so nice to read more of your poetry, keep up the work
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Aww this was a beautiful write with great meaning in such small amount of words. Great job! & good luck in the contest
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I really like your format here, and the imagery..it's very nice and extremly deep.
Very well done! 
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This is awesome, love the angle you chose. A superbly penned piece, good luck in the contest with it
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well gee.. I give up now..lol.. I really liked it! you did good.. lol.. Best of luck!
J.
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