if I rub your back, will you rub mine?
if I hang on, will you?
A contest entry
- single word prompt by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 17, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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nice write..good luck in the contest..xxx
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simplistic and meaningful... x
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Awww, I loved this piece!!! It says so much! I know that sometimes doubt about a relationship/friendship can be the worst thing and you really do wonder if they will hang on in your time of need!
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with baby oil perhaps xx good luck xxpp
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A nicely penned piece. Good luck
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awww
this is sweet
great write
and good luck
take care
stephanie =)
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