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On Bended Knee

Dogged rapture
bends devotion's knee
opened slow before her
a precious, glittering gem

                        his heart

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15 words
Prompt ~ persistent

A contest entry

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  • the sepia vitamin
    April 17, 2008

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    awwww this is so beautiful. And I love the ending. and yes *echoes others* great take on the prompt too. prettiful!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    This is just beautiful... x


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    This is awesome, a wonderful take on the prompt, says so much. Good luck in the contest with it


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    awww this is sooo beautiful
    i really liek it
    good luck and take care
    stephanie =)