Whispered words
cushion infidelities blow
She
surrenders to me softly
His
heart shall never know
Author notes
I went for a same sex tryst... happens more frequently than we think..
In a list
A contest entry
- Adultery by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 17, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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another hot one..
jeez..I am looking for your love poems, but these sensual and erotic ones keep distracting me...
Very steamy write...
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Oooooh la la.. provacative... loving this one. Taps into one's naughty side.. hee hee
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hehe.. there's a lot of that in here lol
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hehe this is a very goood piece 
I am not good at these types of poems the one I did write I gave up and turned it into a humor write about a cake mix in a bowl getting hard and being tossed aside lol Woo Hoo
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hehehe.. I've got a lot of these 'types' in here
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Well captured feelings here...Congrats on the bronze...
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lol uh oh this just sounds nawty hehe =)
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LOL.. there's a few of these in here - beware!! mwahahaha
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*hides* lol
this is good
i love you
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Beautiful...sensual...enticing!
Az
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Alas a bronze for the work of a gold.....Loved it..
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There is something deeply moving about women loving women....sigh....gives me the giggles....if only there was much more of the same....great little poem and congrats on the trophy...
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Startiling picture, startiling write. Very interesting...congrats on the bronze!
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Creative and grasping... x
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Another fantastic write! I really like your line "cushion infidelities blow" very fitting. You have done a great job writting for the prompt.
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Nicely done sweets. Another short one, but packed with alot of meaning and emotion. Great job with this one and good luck!
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Yes, well...this was certainly very imaginative dear and while I do not agree with same sex relations, it portrays a very real part of life today no doubt.
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I love the angle you took with this piece dear. This does happen more frequently in these times. Best of luck in the contest.
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Oh, I really love that picture! You have done outstanding with the presentation and wording in this piece. This poem here says so very much and those last few words says a lot as well
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Interesting take on the pic and an interesting twist on the subject---Good for you---good luck in the contestWell Done & Best of luck in the contest!
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wow
hee hee when is the next performance and can I get box seats? Great stuff. The choice of words is wonderful. Good luck in the contest
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uhmm yeah...
...let's not tell him! l.o.l. I'm a lesbian u know! l.o.l.!
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wow..Jacks you wrote from a same sex pont of view....love it...
Simon
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theres a suprise...pahahaha.
nicely done! think it goes well with the pic in a way
i liked how you did the whole...
she....
then
his...
i dunno...kinda added to the intensity of it because of whats going on without him knowing...
i love it theres something i wanna say but i cant figure it out and its annoying me!!!! lol im rambling!!! sorry...
its wicked good
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Wow this was amazing!!
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Whispered words
Cushion infidelities blow
Amazing what YOU can say with so little words.
Best of luck!
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