tiny frame, thin hands
from her lips spill melody
fragile, strong, alluring
lyrics like bullet wounds
shot straight to my core
small voice, short hair
guitar string sings
her eyes never meet mine
agony, crucifixion, torment
With each word of her song
she breaks my heart
Author notes
I'm not sure if this qualifies.
A contest entry
- April New Member's Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended May 5, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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welcome to allpoetry
I am unsure if the actually would qualify. Option 1 was to describe or be inspired by the picture. What the musician there is thinking, feeling etc. or those who stop to watch him play.
I do like what you have written here. It is a lovely write.
~Kristy -
Welcome to allpoetry
she must be a lovely!! good work, very descriptive.. fine short lines.. on the whole.. Very very poetic!!
thank you for the entry..
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This speaks a lot of feeling and emotion and is well written
For clarification on if it fits into the contest please go back and read the contest rules
Welcome to the site! Best of wishes to you!
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