...Straining
..Lips meet...
.......Breathless..
.bodies...
...Sweat on cooling skin..
Waiting for the one to sample
Author notes
Picture propmt
Words: 15
A contest entry
- Adultery by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 17, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oooo lustful!!! heehehe nice to see this side of you
hehe
well done
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very nice--- i like how u can wrtite something and its so short--- But says so much... Thats really good... i like it.... Keep up the good work!!!
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OOooo love this short little poem. great!!! wow! nice. check mine out x x x
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Such an intriguing and grasping write... x
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hummmmmmmmmmmm
does sound interesting
sample, huh?
positively interesting
intriguing?
hummmmmmmmmm
success in this contest
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have a clappy lol even though you use ellipses wrong
if you want to show ontinuance then three dots only. there is no need for loads
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lol..thenks. I like loads! I go crazy with that stuff thank you for the clappy smiley thingys hope that means you like it!!
J.
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Love the build up of intensity dear sis! Good luck!
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Beautiful
Very sensual write my friend good luck in the contest and keep up the wonderful work -
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I'm glad that you liked it.. Didn't really know what to do with this one either..lol. I find myself lost as to what to write most of the time..lol. thank you for your comment..
Jetleena
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Yip Sis....hey your are my yonger sis....your'e not supposed to know about this sort of thing..lol
Simon
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haha.. stop holding your hands in front of your eyes..lol. I'm not little..lol..
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Wow... love it... such lust in this!
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Thank you very much.. I'm glad that you liked it..
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