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Consequences

Let him see
the result
of foolish trust--
his dreams destroyed
by my wanton lust.

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    Very profound and creatively grasping... x


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    (Damn... there's an echo in here!)

  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    Spot on.


  • Unsigned gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    yip spot on..

    well done poet


    Simon


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    Wowzers... harsh! lol
    Brilliant write for the prompt.

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