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Between The Cushions

walking in
anticipating love

Secret rendezvous
engaging cushion fight

stifled laugh
escapes

then only-

tears

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  • jscribbled
    August 17, 2008
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    wow


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    Deeply creative and incredibly engaging... x


  • Venugopal gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    secrate redezvous, nervous at that. very nice take on prompt..good luck


  • Unsigned gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    hmmmmmm....always tear my friend...always

    Simon


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    Exactly!!! The thrill of the chase is not worth the bite!
    Well done.

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