Small dog
dig and dig
hours at a time
insatiably
tennis ball wedged under couch
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A contest entry
- single word prompt by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 17, 2008, 15 entries
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So clever ~ this made me smile... x
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lol....my mother's dog does this too!
that's how I keep him occupied so when we can have a peaceful visit,
lest I lose my arm to wretched pain throwing that darn
ball endlessly for hours!
sneaky trick, and what a fun poem to enjoy!
well done poet, well done!
ears/Seattle
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short but sweet
excellent imagery!
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Cute
I've watched my dogs get stuck under the couch trying to get a toy out. If they managed, ususally, to get free, they ran from side to side trying to figure out how to get it. -
Hehe love the humour in this one. My dog would just cry till you got it for her..lol. Superbly done, deserves a trophy for sure
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Ha ha ha...Good one that really makes me laugh aloud... nice take on the prompt... Different one indeed...
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hahahaha, thats great =)
this is humoros and a diff take on the prompt
good luck
stephanie =)
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