i found a new love
a love who doesnt lie
a love who says its been wonderful
after we say a little good-bye
no strings or ties
no more shallow get-me-byes
its all legit
this time i dont have to cry
someone who is real
someone who's honest
open with eachother
dont have to be modest
she's someone real special
who is happy being free
that someone i speak of
is no one else, but me
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This is sweet
Yes we do often have someone close within that understands like no other ever could .
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What dean said. ~G -
Dawn
I love the sentiment, which is absolutely spot on. We need to learn to love ourselves first, before we can truly give oursleves and our love to another. Reminded me of one of my fabourite songs 'The Greatest Love', the version sung by George Benson, which includes the line that goes something like 'learning to love yourself is the greatest love of all'.
Quite a few typos in this, so would benefit from a little editing.
Dean
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oh dean, hush on the type o's. when i am in the mood to write i am not in the mood to edit. i do however appreciate your approval of my poem. thanks for reading.
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Noted. And you are very welcome Dawn - i thoroughly enjoyed
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