gripping my nerves
tearing away
layers of truth
and yet,
still wanting
my very
((soul))
A contest entry
- single word prompt by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 17, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Delicately penned and meaningful... x
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Smoothly penned, really says it all, you took the prompt and created a superb piece. Good luck
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gripping my nerves - this phrase says much about 'what persistent' is all about. Great take on the prompt...I really loved it...
Good luck in the contest
Love
-Kiddy -
awww wow! i love this, it's wonderful
great take on the prompt and good luck!
take care
stephanie =)
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