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Drowning

The water is too deep
She can't stay up

She is going under
She cant breathe
She needs help

All she sees is blurry
Time is running out

She can't get out
She is drowning

She inhales
Water fills her lungs

Her eyes get cloudy
She stops fighting

Her body goes limp
She slowly goes down

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