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Bubbly dosage.

Bubbly dosage.




















Midnight, bottle had a pink label
Omni, I am sure it was called.
Bubbles to drown the sorrows
my familiar medicine, of sorts.

Let me giggle and forget this tormenting
pain, have no regrets.

Midnight treats, deliciously fruity.

Given the chance.
That night,
I would’ve drunk one of every colour…….

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 22, 2008

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    Well lets get this party started I say!!!


    Sounds like fun.. and great for cheering us up when we need it!!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 21, 2008
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    A wonderful poem, not sure I'd want to try this drink tho..lol. I'm assuming it changes colours...sounds pretty A great piece


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      April 21, 2008

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      hehehehe

      the one of every colour is..that they have a white wine champagne..a red..and a mix...then they also have citrus flavoured one..and a berry flavoured one lol..so they all have different coloured labels...and are called omni ...omni pink...omni red..omni blue..omni citrus etc lol

      SO that should explain the every colour...which I realise many won't understand if they dont know the champagne

      Sorry lol

      • LadyDementia gold member
        April 21, 2008

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        Ah, not being much of a drinker I didn't know they did all these colours. Heard of the pink champagne, (I didn't like it ) but not the others, citrus sounds scrummy!

        • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
          April 21, 2008
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          ohhh yes citrus is like my second fav hehehehe,....the normal champagne..Just Omni heheh is my total fav

          I am not much of a drinker nowadays...thats cause I can get started and get too lost in it all...
          So I'm a good girl who only dirnks every once in a while and doesnt go outta control

          lol


  • Cannonsfire
    April 17, 2008

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    Oh I have drunk Omni and I saw the colors afterwards lol won't do that again in a hurry . Great job on this, good luck in the contest. Love, C


  • lovelight05
    April 17, 2008

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    Good poem but the title isn't one of the provided titles. I didn't mean for it to be a prompt. please could you change the title. Thanks.


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    Get out the glasses and I'll be there shortly honey. Nothing like bubbles tickling your nose to cheer you up.

    Best of luck in the contest.

    Love and hugs
    Mum

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