Looking at you
it's hard to turn away
i'm trying to find out how
to find the words i need to say
Every time i think of you
my heart pounds and my blood starts to rush
and every time you hug me
i can't help but blush
Sometimes when you even just pass me
i feel adrenelin run through my veins
and in your warm embrace
i no longer have any pains
As i continue to stare
you start looking at me too
and finally the words come
Krystal... I Love You
Author notes
This is about my current girl... and i really believe i love her...
A contest entry
- Saying "I Love You" for the first time... by SchizoChic.
450 points, ended April 21, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Awww... very nice. -
Awww. hun this was so sweet and beautiful..I'm so proud of you and I'm sure that she is a wonderful girl.. Treat her well!!..
best of luck to you hun..
Jetleena
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Loverly...
Nice piece. I like the background you chose for it as well. A bit of intrigue in the beginning-you don't know how it will end.
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