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Spiritual Dance Of Love

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I cradle your soul with lullaby songs
Whisper closely inside each heartbeat's sigh
For when I am near you my soul feels whole
And you are the tune that uplifts mine high.

Within your sweet whispers to rest I kneel
Of soft words you‘ve spoken, vivid and clear
Connected to the true love you reveal
Pure souls deliver us passion so dear

Entwined as church-bells ring a hymn we strum
With our intertwining heart-strings we play
Let our love grow as our air flows through lungs
And may God grace our dreaming souls each day

Upon the pew where two loving souls meet
Each Sunday morning in spiritual tune
Embraced by angel’s wings and tapping feet
Our own service lasting way after noon

With all that is within us, honestly
Singing in our hearts, love me tenderly.

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Once again Timothy I love you and thank you so much for making this hellish night in the hospital a pleasureable one. I adore you sweet soul.

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  • prochick
    May 13

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    love always is the conquerer,even if dark days may appear love is always clearerfor me this is 10times bigups

  • LittleAnn
    April 27

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    Hoodwink

    Another gentle and really wonderfully written poem...
    The rhyming and rhythm are really well done.

    I enjoyed reading this one as well.
    Keep on writing!
    Annie


  • Endeavor gold member
    April 26

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    Excellent


    Upon the pew where two loving souls meet
    Each Sunday morning in spiritual tune
    Embraced by angel’s wings and tapping feet
    Our own service lasting way after noon

    With all that is within us, honestly
    Singing in our hearts, love me tenderly.

    Totally beautiful

    Rick


  • Talloaks silver member
    April 24
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    HOOD WINK

    A very beautiful write of love and the confort that it brings. I like the flow and the rythme of it. Excellent overall.
    Enjoyed this ver much. "Within your sweet whispers to rest I kneel
    Of soft words you‘ve spoken, vivid and clear"
    (Bandits Poets)


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    April 18

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    What a beautiful loving poem. A great collaboration, I'd say. *smile*


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 16

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    -Hugs-

    Well, it's the very least I can do for you sweet soul. I enjoy penning with you so very much. And if I could take an ounce of pain from ya, or just your thoughts on how bad ya feel like at this moment in time. I'm so glad I could help. Thanks for penning another one with me. Tried to stop for a 14 line sonnet, but oh well, we had a bit more to say.. Much love and light~

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~

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