if i cant tell you i miss you
if i cant tell you i love you
then what can i say
havent you ever
wanted to love someone
to hold someone in your arms
to be able to make someone
feel safe, warm and loved
havent you ever
wanted to kiss someone
to kiss with not the intention of sex
but with a passion and care
gentle kisses of meaning
havent you ever
dreamed of loving another
with not the intention of marriage
just a time spent in life
without a care in the world
havent you ever
wondered what love is
what its true feeling is
inside of your soul
havent you ever
held out your heart
to someone
and had it pushed
back at you
havent you ever
thought of someone
in a way
that you think of no other
havent you ever
thought
that feelings are endless
you can never run out
havent you ever
wondered what it would be like
loving someone
i know i have
and this is why i ask
Havent you ever
loved
should i give this to the guy i wrote it to?
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Yay!
I really liked this. It was totally sweet, and I loved it. And I can answer yes to a bunch of those questions
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<3 ~(Chanted)~
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great write hun... keep it up xxx
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omg tress this is sooo good=} im jealou
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i love it
this is an amazing poem i agree with your friends 100% great write XD -
Awesome poem! XD I love it!!
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Much improvement. (; lol.
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there i fixed it u were right tho it did sound funny but now it isnt yay lol
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Yeah.. Hannah is right, this is a really good poem, and it explains how your feeling perfectly. Except one little thing, it sounds like your writing it about a girl. I know your writing it to a guy asking him if he's felt that way about a girl, but it sounds like your talking about liking the girl. Maybe you should fix that, but other than that little error, I think it's really rather great.
<333 you my sister, my best friend,
Kaitlyn
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Great write! Love is a very wonderful thing but it can be confusing as hell and difficult. You show your feelings very nicely .
<3 Hannah
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