this way and that way,
the biggest airplane that there ever was
flies across my head
making me sing about it all day long
whereas I may not have thought about it
otherwise.
the biggest airplane that there ever was,
I can hear it so loud
there must not be anything exceeding,
my eyes see it in front of me soon disappearing
so logically it is going a million miles an hour
cuz even though I'm far away
I still notice the fast pattern.
look up, look out everyone,
the biggest airplane that there ever was i
s passing right over us
it's making the building rattle
yes, the pilot
thinks he's driving
the biggest airplane there ever was,
sing about it in a tune repeatedly
and you'll be a motor yourself!
Author notes
I wrote this for my dad for a quick laugh before he went off to work. He asked me to write it on this topic because we talk about it all the time lol. So, it is more simple than usual.
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A contest entry
- #56 For the kids 12 and under by daviscth.
400 points, ended April 17, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very Nice
This poem felt very nice to me
Excellent
I think you can shine in the haiku types of poems
I mean Tanka , senryu etc etc
Okay then Keep writing my friend
Blessings
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